Differences between countries are barely evident these days. Everyone in the world is wearing the same brands and watching the same TV channels and movies. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
There are split opinions regarding similarities between countries in casual matters such as using the same brands and watching the same TV channels and movies. Some believe that it is beneficial, while, another group of individuals thinks that it is unfavorable. However, both have their own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both opinions would be discussed.
Examining the former opinion, the foremost argument the supporters would put forward is that it can improve an economical growth of a developing country. This is because, many multinational companies have their branches worldwide, which can solve the major issue of unemployment. Furthermore, by watching some TV shows and movies, information, as well as knowledge, can be spread around the globe. For example, a channel like ‘Discovery’ broadcasts knowledge about current researches from different parts of the world. So that, this is necessary for the developing nations being in touch with a developed one.
On the contrary, the latter view suggests that it has several drawbacks. The primary disadvantage is that it can cause a loss of an identity of a particular brand. For instance, Nike, Skechers, Starbucks, McDonald’s can be found all over the globe. Moreover, competition has increased with globalization. Thereby, circulating the information or products can lead to mislay of mastery of a manufacturer or a founder. As a result, it can be unprofitable for any nation to share such economical objects.
To sum up and offer my position, I would state that increased equality between nations is a positive thing. Additionally, it can help in the development of a whole population. It can also improve the relations between regions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17902716073 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8728182502 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2777777778 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15587879966 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416132255574 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686169410465 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950302498458 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635707365261 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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