Digital technology helps to share daily activities with on social media. Is it positive and negative development
There is no doubt,today electronic diveces are part of our life specially in teenagers. Due to the advancement of technology,most of the people use multimedia for sharing our picture,videos and routine pursuit and so on. Although,the trend of this technology has more advantages yet we cannot ignore the awful effects of this development.
To commence with,there are several reasons why social media is more beneficially for neitizen. Firstly,most of the masses earn income as well as entertaining for others people's through this For instance, nowadays more individuals forge YouTube channel for blogs,cooking ,makeup and crafts videos after that they make videos on useful content and entertain the people. Thus, they earn a income from YouTube management.
Furthermore, many manufacturers sell their products with the help of internet or attract the customers by offering huge discounts and by some interesting advertising. As a result, they expand our business and create good relationships with consumers or maintain goodwill.
On the flip side,the more the use of social media ,the more the drawback of our life because children are spend their time on multimedia and they can't concentrate on their studies and misuse the golden or increasing health problems like stress,eyesight and backbone issues so on. Therefore, they are failing in exams and cannot achieve our goals and spoil our future dreams. Additionally, the disadvantage those people who are working from home can be lovely and if they have a problem that cannot be fixed online. Hence,they cannot mix up with colleagues and sometimes make lazy it decrease the opportunities.
In conclusion, technology has made our life do much easy but there are many positive and negative effects on the people's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36200716846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06792867908 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.933353476 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120435953255 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427415281761 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456749744136 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070582151817 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300609131193 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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