Owning a pet is become increasingly commonplace in many parts of the world. While this tendency can bring several drawbacks to some degree, I would contend it has greater benefits.
On the one hand, there are a host of reasons why people refuse to have a pet. The first reason is raising pets if costly. This is because people have to spend a huge amount of budget on necessary services, such as food provision and medical care, therefore, it is unaffordable for owners who live under the poverty line. Another reason is there are a myriad of fur-related allergies or even respiratory diseases, which poses a threat to human’s health.
However, I believe what can be gained from this tendency can be far more beneficial. Firstly, some pets can heal patients and cheer them up, thus, it is therapeutic to raise pets. As well as this, some domestic animals are considered as friends as well because they prevent owners from isolation or even autism especially for those living alone and children lacking parents’ care. Furthermore, by taking care of and assuming duty obligations, such as feeding and house-training, individuals can learn to be more responsible and rich in kindness, thereby nurturing people’s soul. Finally, dogs, for instance, can do tasks like guarding or protecting their masters.
In conclusion, although its is true that having a pet can lead to some disadvantages, I would argue people should be encouraged to do this due to a large number of advantages it brings back.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... should be encouraged to do this due to a large number of advantages it brings back.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85542604205 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661354581673 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7456400886 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130655410866 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586219192851 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633708319702 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749877108555 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316216394271 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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