Discuss both sides of which people prefer to have as suitable place for studying, university housing or apartment.
provide evidences and reasons then give your overall opinion.
over past few years, an enormous controversy has emerged about the use of printed newspapers and books . A segment of society argued that in the modern world, entirely knowledge and information will be save and conserve in the internet, and the traditional paper will be redundant. manufacture them merely waste the money and generate the detrimental impact for environment. The rest of community have a rebuttal that printed book and paper have it own inherently value and electronic device can not radically supplant them. All of the opinion have own reason and presumably evidence, but from my perspective, paper is dispensable in the the future and their drawback is far outweight the adventages.
On one hand, it is evident that replace all the books and newspaper in the short period is not feasible. Currently, myriad people in the world depend on paper to nurture their life. manufacturing paper and some occupation related to this like harness the wood and transport have considerable employees and there are a extensive element in the economy. In some region like Indonesia, manufacturing paper account for 20 percent of total country revenue and 15 percent of employee. if we want to eliminate the prited paper, we have to find adequately alternative job for a huge of people. some of senior can not use the electronic device and hardly learn this due to the age and mental illness is another issue. Old people solely utilize the traditional books therefore instruct them use the internet book and change the fundamental life style is very strenuous because bad comprehension.
On the other hand, alter the approach to information and knowledge is the crucial mission for human. we all aware that composition of paper primarily is wood and we have to exploit a large quantity of plants and forest to manufacture them. this can cause the huge detrimental effect for the world, because the plants supply the wood for this process need a lot of time to growth ( over 2 decade ).And the lack of wood plants not only reduce the release oxygen and promote the climate change but also dissipate habitat for wildlife. In the long term, it can lead to the extinction of some animal and cause imbalance in the ecosystem. we can not replace all the traditional book in the short period but we can gradually do this. Inaugurate some instruction electronic device and make sure children can approach early with internet is a good method. And if we protract this process to 20 or 30 years, it will be a adequate time for people seek out other job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89145496536 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71985455188 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5103926097 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.801007187 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.473684211 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7894736842 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47368421053 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871060093421 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285911604982 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236174953182 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064068262666 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00654007727016 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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