The divorce rate is increasing. What are the causes and solutions?
Currently, the rise in the divorce rate is a topical issue as so many nations are seeing this pattern. From my perspective, there are two main causes and a great number of solutions that we can take.
First of all, the main cause is probably the occurrence of inequality in the house. According to statistics, 50% of women in Vietnam still suffer from being assaulted by their spouse for not doing household chores and cooking. Moreover, others say that they lack freedom since they are forced to follow the rules of their husband. For example, if they want to go out with their friends, they have to ask for permission before leaving.
The other factor that brings about the situation is the deprivation of compassion in marriage. For instance, some couples seem not to agree on reaching decisions, or when they have quarrels, the other person does not feel the need to make an apology. Gradually, this leads to divorce, when individuals cannot stand having controversies every day.
However, there are various measures that can be adopted to lessen the problem. Firstly, it is recommended that policymakers should create ways to reserve the rights of women such as setting up a national hotline for them to contact if they are being abused. Besides, before getting married, couples should be introduced to pre-marriage courses to acquire knowledge and prepare for a long-lasting relationship with their partner. Finally, in their daily life, husbands and wives should put in more effort to promote intimacy in the relationship by sharing housework, spending quality time with each other and opting for discussions instead of arguing aggressively.
In conclusion, the causes of this phenomenon are primarily to do with the lack of equality and empathy during marriage life; the viable solutions involve the actions of governments and everyone can carry out to change the occurrence. If this trend continues, it will result in being afraid of entering into marriage among young generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14589665653 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6971021473 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632218844985 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8737148169 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714447084501 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243957836316 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431588921101 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474858783167 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537398846539 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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