It is concerned that split-up of marriage rates and family disruptions are globally growing, while this issue were virtually unheard of around hundred years ago. In this essay, i intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some solutions to it.
Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle. It is became harder for today’s parents working than thoses of previous generations to earn money fortheir families. In tradition, one parent assumed a role of breadwinner while the other acted as the homemaker. As a consequence, chilldren have to grow up in a parentless environment, which was rooted of alienation. Moreover, one of factor has influenced in families is temptation such as entertainment or solitary activities
In order to resolve this sense of alienation within families, i believe we must first address its root causes. On the one hand, people’s lifestyle must change in order to fill the lack of communication and closeness between family members. One of the possible solution is that both parents could share works together in stead of burden for individual. On the other hand, parents who choose to remain at home could offer governments for financial incentives. Although these subsidises may not solely handle financial burden of families, it would reduce a part of pressure. In addition, one possible method would be to promote more interactive leisure activties in community through public education campaigns. For instance, joining some social festival such as family day organized by people’s committee not only a beneficial way to improve closeness but also relaxation after tressfull job.
In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term. However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitude a good first step.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: become
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...is sense of alienation within families, i believe we must first address its root ...
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Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...both parents could share works together in stead of burden for individual. On the other han...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30201342282 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94161158043 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637583892617 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2782665379 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225276601949 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660399000976 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622823144504 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128370520122 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624547437183 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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