Do you agree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers.
Many successful public figures claim that that behind the success stand their parents not either university or school teachers, according to autobiographies. The trend, once again, has proved the fact that parents can be the best mentors owing to they understand children significantly better than others and be role models.
It has always been guided in a process of teaching, it is important how is a student taught not what he is taught by psychologists. In terms of this parents are the best due to the fact that they can "read" children as a book. My brother and I, for instance, were taught separately: my mother has taught me as I am more gentle while the brother has been mentored by the father; because we had a different temper and patience toward studying. Thus, this attitude has positively affected our progress at school.
The second reason has pros and cons; nevertheless, they are inevitable. Parents are the initial role models for children to emulate. Consequently, this factor determines the future of children. For example, if a dad is inclined to drink alcohol, so a child is also likely to end up like his father. On the other hand, if a child has a hard-working, law-abiding and honest father, the child will possibly grow up a good citizen.
It is a controversial question that who is the best mentor for children. Bearing in mind the factors above parents can be the one. Thus, it is crucial that parents try doing a good role model for children since they have a substantial influence on children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...is taught by psychologists. In terms of this parents are the best due to the fact th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86692015209 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90050524015 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1667894593 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112337377985 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389062292261 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397018557581 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074248812331 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444470485279 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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