School is certainly the place where students spend most of their time. Some people argue that arts such as painting and music should be obligated at schools, while many contend that schools ought to concentrate on math and science. I personally disagree that arts must be mandated and will elaborate the same in this essay.
In this contemporary era, world has become more competitive and students are expected to learn more science and technology. Many schools, for instance, inculcate programming skills during students’ early years of education, which can help them to acquire lucrative jobs in the future. If schools concentrate on arts instead, they might not have sufficient time for upscaling the students with these programming skills. The key skill of finding job opportunity, thus, would not be imbibed if schools concentrate more on arts.
Moreover, some students loathe arts as they lack confidence in such skills. If schools mandate dancing, for example, some morbidly obese students might be seriously uncomfortable. This might result in anxiety and depression for those kids which will deteriorate their health. In extreme cases, those children might discontinue their education to come out of this stress and fear. Mandating arts, hence, might have adverse impact on students’ attitude towards school.
In conclusion, schools must concentrate on science and technology more than arts as the former is more important in fetching them employment opportunities in the future. Also, mandating arts might afflict some students who are disinterested in learning them. Hence, arts should not be a compulsory at schools.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All studentsshould be required to study art and music in secondary school Usespecific reasons to support your answer 73
- Education in financial management should be a mandatory component of the school program To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- In many countries the government likes to spend more money on the arts some people agree with this however other think government should spend more on health and education discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46456692913 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79747058102 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0620349102 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175807752685 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690218011987 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419376704136 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123744511055 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420745503204 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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