Do you agree or disagree that animals should be kept in men made cells.
In the world, every spices should have right to live with freedom. However, selfish humans keep animals in cages. I firmly disagree with the given statement . I feel that zoos are an unsuitable environment for animals and therefore should be abolished. All the reasons of my stand will be discussed in further paragraph.
There are an ample reasons for putting ban on zoos. In all of them the foremost one is that bad effect on their natural habit. Explaining it, All animals are habituated to live in vast area. In zoo, they have to live in confined area which is not suitable for them. Furthermore, it makes impact on their different ability likes running fast , hunting . For example, cheetah is faster than other animals in the world. If humans keep cheetah in cages, it definitely loss their power of running. Like that, lions and tigers are famous for the hunting. Their efficiency of hunting might be get effect because of prison.
Additionally, I also perceive that they might be suffer from many diseases because of their poor physical and mental health condition. Because of some experts’ view, I tend to believe that they also feel depression. They can not speak that does not mean that they do not have feeling. Moreover, the corrupt officer of government also do illegal earning from innocent animals. Some local people also sell animals for money to these types of authorities. If we remove the system of zoo , business of animals can be disable.
However, some groups of individuals counter argue and claim that zoo is essential for old animals. As per their views, above certain age animals can not go for hunting. So they might be die because of starvation. If they are in cage , they can get food at regular time period. In addition, it is best source from where government can earn good revenue. They also admit that it is best visiting place for children and family.
To sum up, humans have no authority to caging the marvellous creation of gods. They should be in the jungle instead of zoo. However , some people think that it is helpful for animals who do not have ability to find their food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79564032698 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45610063606 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.31410062 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.6896551724 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6551724138 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44827586207 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141827560817 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417734197099 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437011870781 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967462325305 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541810657139 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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