Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
No one can deny class="that">that educators always class="try">try their best to provide their students the ideal education system in the world. From this point of view, class="if">if I were forced to choose, I class="would">would agree class="that">that universities class="should">should allocate money equally to pupils' sports activities. The reasons for class="which">which I believe class="that">that are students class="would">would adopt physical exercise as a daily life routine, improve their interpersonal skills, and foster their class="mental">mental welfare.
First and foremost, supporting athletic departments finically class="would">would class="help">help more students to stay in shape throughout their lives. For instance, I remember class="when">when I was a freshman, I used to class="visit">visit the class="school">school class="gym">gym, at class="least">least class="three">three times a class="week">week, and I loved to do class="that">that because the class="gym">gym was fully equipped and constantly renovated. Even class="after">after graduation from class="school">school, I class="have">have continued practicing class="three">three times a class="week">week because exercising has become a daily ritual.
In addition, dedicating monetary resources to promote more participation in class="sport">sport activities class="would">would class="help">help students to refine their listening and speaking skills. For example, I remember during college, class="what">what sincerely encouraged class="me">me to class="speak">speak out class="my">my class="mind">mind was physical education classes. Yes, because during the class, class="my">my team and I used to spend half of the class exchanging ideas and trying to come up with plans to secure winning. Hence, class="after">after graduation, due to P.E classes, I class="have">have become more confident to communicate class="my">my opinions to others.
Last but not class="least">least, investment in sports equally class="would">would aid students in boosting their class="mental">mental welfare. To illustrate, I remember class="when">when I was in college, like any other student, I had a lot on class="my">my plate. I had daily assignments and projects with specific deadlines; as a result, at class="that">that time, class="what">what helped class="me">me to relive class="my">my pressure is practicing. because class="when">when we practice, our bodies reduce stress hormones, class="which">which, in turn, will class="help">help us to channel our negative emotions into positive ones. Consequently, class="if">if I had never visited the class="gym">gym, I class="would">would class="have">have never had an intact state of class="mind">mind through class="my">my educational journey.
In conclusion, I strongly agree class="that">that universities class="should">should fund sports endeavors equally as libraries for various reasons. Such reasons are teaching students to be physically fit and active, willing to listen to opposing ideas and unwinding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3463.0 1615.20841683 214% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 9.23466666667 5.12529762239 180% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.48719052196 2.80592935109 338% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 906.3 506.74238477 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.60771543086 149% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 5.43587174349 460% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3463300746 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.705882353 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0345001645312 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328760317161 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291865432002 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467237486645 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391771508727 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.53 50.2224549098 -37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 36.25 12.4159519038 292% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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