Today in the new century, people tends more to boarden their knowledge about other countries all over the world. There are limited ways to acquire information about them such as travelling, internet and advertisement. In my perspective, advertisement tells us a lot about the country. Advertisement give the information about the people's culture, lifestyle and faith devotion of the country.
Firstly, advertisement depicts a country's culture and costumes. Many countries prefer western dresses while other countries have traditional outfits. So the textile companies definitely show ads respective to the country. For example, in India the textile company mostly show sarees ads for Indian women. To show similar ads in America will be wothless, because sarees is not the outfit prefer in America. One can get knowledge by the ads about the culture and pack their bags during the visit.
Secondly, the lifestyle of every country is different. Advertisement gives the idea about people life, their foods of different countries. For example, indians foods are spicy while american has meats in their dishes. Italian people mostly prefer fast food. Advertisement will tell about the food and dishes of particular country. You will be aware about this by watching ads.
Lastly, the advertisements tell us about the faith devotion of the country. For example, in Indian ads you mostly sees pooja thali and people worshipping gods in temples. Meanwhile in American ads you will see churches and people worshipping Jesus. Advertisements give the knowledge about faith devotion.
Advertisement are well designed and presented according to the country and what particular country people like to see. To conclude, advertisement helps us to enhance the knowledge of countries culture, lifestyle and faith devotion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51254480287 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89430906455 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512544802867 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7004398782 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.9090909091 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6818181818 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77272727273 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17349905927 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642035105992 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654656472518 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108485725604 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055763278292 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.79 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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