In this day and age , classmates influence to child more than their parents due to understanding encouragement and motivations .
First of all , classmates are understandable partners . It is likely that they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend to work on the problem that they are facing with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers , they can have some sensitive secrets that they don't want to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their friends soft skills which helps themselves deal with some certain situation .
On the other hand , it is true that parents play a important role in children success due to their financial support and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer students opportunities to study in the best learning environment . Needless to say , universities require tuition fees that is paid by parents to provide students with adequate facilities before students going to school . In this way , children will have a chance to gain experience and knowledge from attending school . What is more , parents can give children encouragement and motivation to have good performance at school . It is a common sight that many parents are aware of the importance of education and set expectation foe children 's accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close connection between parents and children by helping with doing assignments or engaging in discussion about school topics .
In conclusion , it is clearly undoubtable that the role of classmates and parents have a positive effect on children at school . However , children should take learning
the best of the parents and friends into consideration .
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school 61
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
- Some people think that boys and girls should be educated in the same schools Others however believe that girls achieve better results when educated in single sex schools Discuss both these views and give your opinion 67
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
- It is very important that children should study hard at school time spend studying on the Internet is time wasted Do agree or disagree
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this day and age , classmates influence to child more than...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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...erstanding encouragement and motivations . First of all , classmates are unders...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gement and motivations . First of all , classmates are understandable partners ...
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Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., classmates are understandable partners . It is likely that they know each other ...
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Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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...likely that they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend to work on...
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Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...on the problem that they are facing with in order to solve it an easy way , for ...
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Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...g with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers ,...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers , ...
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Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... , for examples : As they are teenagers , they can have some sensitive secrets th...
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Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n have some sensitive secrets that they dont want to talk with their parents . Howev...
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Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hey dont want to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with t...
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ant to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with their class...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... feel free to talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their fr...
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Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their friends soft ski...
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Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mselves deal with some certain situation . On the other hand , it is true that ...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...certain situation . On the other hand , it is true that parents play a importan...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...her hand , it is true that parents play a important role in children success due ...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... financial support and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer stude...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rt and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer students opportunitie...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o study in the best learning environment . Needless to say , universities require ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t learning environment . Needless to say , universities require tuition fees that ...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cilities before students going to school . In this way , children will have a chan...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e students going to school . In this way , children will have a chance to gain exp...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ence and knowledge from attending school . What is more , parents can give childre...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dge from attending school . What is more , parents can give children encouragement...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ation to have good performance at school . It is a common sight that many parents ...
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Line 3, column 745, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...foe children s accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close con...
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Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close connection betwee...
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Line 3, column 903, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gaging in discussion about school topics . In conclusion , it is clearly undoub...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n about school topics . In conclusion , it is clearly undoubtable that the role...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... a positive effect on children at school . However , children should take learning...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e effect on children at school . However , children should take learning the bes...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... However , children should take learning the best of the parents and friends into...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e parents and friends into consideration .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22614840989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00306988588 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.646297107 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264953687436 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925509779092 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561377560835 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143366992794 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764046151299 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this day and age , classmates influence to child more than...
^^
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...erstanding encouragement and motivations . First of all , classmates are unders...
^^
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gement and motivations . First of all , classmates are understandable partners ...
^^
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., classmates are understandable partners . It is likely that they know each other ...
^^
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...likely that they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend...
^^
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend to work on...
^^
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on the problem that they are facing with in order to solve it an easy way , for ...
^^
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers ,...
^^
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers , ...
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Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... , for examples : As they are teenagers , they can have some sensitive secrets th...
^^
Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n have some sensitive secrets that they dont want to talk with their parents . Howev...
^^^^
Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hey dont want to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with t...
^^
Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ant to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with their class...
^^
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... feel free to talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their fr...
^^
Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their friends soft ski...
^^
Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mselves deal with some certain situation . On the other hand , it is true that ...
^^
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...certain situation . On the other hand , it is true that parents play a importan...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...her hand , it is true that parents play a important role in children success due ...
^
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... financial support and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer stude...
^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rt and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer students opportunitie...
^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o study in the best learning environment . Needless to say , universities require ...
^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t learning environment . Needless to say , universities require tuition fees that ...
^^
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cilities before students going to school . In this way , children will have a chan...
^^
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e students going to school . In this way , children will have a chance to gain exp...
^^
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ence and knowledge from attending school . What is more , parents can give childre...
^^
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dge from attending school . What is more , parents can give children encouragement...
^^
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ation to have good performance at school . It is a common sight that many parents ...
^^
Line 3, column 745, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...foe children s accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close con...
^^
Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close connection betwee...
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Line 3, column 903, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gaging in discussion about school topics . In conclusion , it is clearly undoub...
^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n about school topics . In conclusion , it is clearly undoubtable that the role...
^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... a positive effect on children at school . However , children should take learning...
^^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e effect on children at school . However , children should take learning the bes...
^^
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... However , children should take learning the best of the parents and friends into...
^^^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e parents and friends into consideration .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22614840989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00306988588 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.646297107 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264953687436 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925509779092 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561377560835 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143366992794 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764046151299 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.