The story begins from the entertainment sector doing well on small and large platforms convincing the highest proportion of audience and ends when it satisfy the old and potential customer at standard terms.I partially agree with the mentioned statement that television act as a blockage in family or friend relationships, while, it focusing on traditional as well as modern values presentable to the society on the best interest. I will discuss about the problems and the solution it offering to the lovers of television with specific reasons.
The negative side of television service area is explained under following lines. One of the disturbing thing is that the family members running short of time to ask even three words, ' How's the day ?' .The tension in their minds what happen next to character in the running story of famous show all their concern. They are very busy in following their favourite television stars , that, they do not know the difference between real life and celebrity life. For Example, ' Naggin' is the hottest and trendy show telecast on 'colors' channel working on the story that's even not real in this world. Wastage of time and cautious about who die or live left the audience in suffering through the dissapointed zone that has not any end. That's the point television is a good medium of sharing stories, but, one constraint atleast it should be real.
Looking on the drawbacks by watching television in daily routine, one can't forget to explain it's positive affects on the customer base. First, the colourful pictures and quality of screen put us in an amazing position on the couch. The television offers variety of channel according to customer interest at reasonable family pack rates or individual one. Second, the learners can learn from the given channels like 'Sony Pix' known for 'Hollywood films '. We can learn foreign language by reading English statement on the screen of this channel .This all are the good points that bet to be countable when just thinking on worst side of television service.
At the end, it all about to the explanation given above set to be realize , that, it's on the audience how they gonna use the entertaining service provided by television. The television is a tangible object, we can't transfer human being mistakes to it. It's our concern to manage the time with family or friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03807106599 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6178022874 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591370558376 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.2526287985 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134281636348 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389420506343 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380053531416 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808462929853 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409785754589 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.