Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Society is an essential part of our life and the future of the society will depend on our actions All walks of life can play a significant role to build a good society. People are having a hard time reaching a consensus on whether youth generation have no role for society. A plethora of people holds conflicting views. As far I am concerned, i believe young people are more active to make a decision on society. There are several reasons to support my view and i will explore it in the following essay
To begin with, we can look our society that a massive change has been done. For example, back to 15 years ago, we have to live a far cry distance from our family. It is true that most of the time, we can hardly look after them. Consequently, family boding along with friendship is getting worse and we are being alone. It is obvious that now we are happier as we can contact each other through social media. Here, Mark zuckerberg a facebook founder played a pivotol role for the future society and he invented it whenever he was young guy. So, based on this info, we can say without doubt that young folks have a great role in society.
Secondly, look at the political site in our world.For instance , we can consider the role of newzeland president, a young person who is leading her country. Morever, Malala Yusuf a novelist girl aslo influences her society by educating children.Having saying this, however, young folks are doing good to make great.
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Given the factors above, I may reach a conclusion that the great change in society are made by young crowds and we do not ig
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50519031142 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46917741337 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0011412288 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168079921114 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588972620896 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388342519322 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104673229372 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439031913281 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.