Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the car is one of the essential parts in human lives, and by inventing of advanced technology, our lives will be more comfortable and more dependent on cars. There is a controversial view about decease or increase the number of cars using by people in twenty years ahead from now. While, some people say that there will be a fewer car in use than there are today, others have a different opinion. I agree with the latter group and explain several reasons in the following paragraph.
There will be more demand for the car, by added new options and advanced technologies in a new car. Many people already have a car, but they want the better ones. By progress technology, car companies use it in a new model of car and tempt customers to buy it. Compare with twenty years ago, not only produce of car increased, but also, varieties, options, and technologies that use in cars, significantly improve. Car manufactories by advanced produce model will encourage people to buy a new car.
Controversy to the past, today car become a basic need. In several decades before cars were a luxurious device, but now, it seems, having a car is a necessary thing to have more than ever. In the metropolis, by the formation of a new style of life and existence different entertainment, people need to have a car for a normal life. For example, in the daily routine life of one family, parents need a car to go to the work, a child needs it to go to school; also, family needs a car to go shopping, etc.
Many people have not a car and attempt to buy one. If whole cars in the world consider, we observed, increase it in twenty years from now. There are many undeveloped countries that their people not wealthy enough to buy a car. These people try to buy a car in the future, and consequently, they increase the total number of cars in use in the world.
To sum up, it seems the number of cars in use will increase in the future, and finally, in twenty years there will be more cars in use than there are today.
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Ohio is a state located in the Midwest region of the Northeastern United States. "Ohio" means beautiful living and this is also the name of a river adjacent to the border with the us map state of Kentucky. This place is also the place to nurture famous US Presidents.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45528455285 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56849100167 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449864498645 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8070125498 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293575493514 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114917417188 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852847369139 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216292656521 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110903335117 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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