Do you believe that societies ought to enforce capital punishment or are there alternative forms of punishment that would be better used?
Give reasons for your answers
Punishment is a sort of lesson which makes the person to realise what he had done wrong so this topic asserts a belief communities should emphasis
Other aspects of punishment which cold be better to used and i will enunciate about it below.
Firstly, punishment tend us to comprehend the mistake which we have done in past and resist us to commit the crimes where It is enable us to become better person in future. many people tend to do a criminal activities and that's why plenty of punishments are made by the local authorities. For insight, In retro times, there were miraculously punishment done by local governments such as in Egypt mummification if someone had done crime as well as in british times, there were punishment called shredded with bullets by machine. Because this sort of punishment criminal activities was decline in england
Secondly, if there is no punishments to penalize the criminals so there would be a dramatic growth of criminal activities which lead to the devastating view of human life. Inadequacy of punishment make the criminal stronger to commit the dangerous crimes such as cyber robbing, such as in india there is lack of laws about women safety which causes everyday boost the women molestation as well as rape cases.
In conclusion, I would say capital punishment a death penalty is a bring down to the criminals. If they tend to do such criminal activity which hazardous against human life and I belive there should be a alternatives of the punishment to criminals according to their commitment of such crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93536121673 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80096806161 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539923954373 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5088488646 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.25 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22098936951 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106145795271 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363021169311 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1336096767 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535822948582 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.