Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?
In these days, the question of whether doctors have to take responsibility for giving advice to their patients or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention. I content that this trend is completely justified.
There are a number of compelling reasons why it is doctors who should directly advise patients on medical issues. First, since each doctor undergoes the process of rigorous education and training, he is qualify enough to be a better consultant than any others. In fact, each doctor has at least 6 years of academic training in his majors such as diagnosis, treatment, which gives him the knowledge of medicine to give accurately advice. Second, by self-educating through the Internet or books, patients are able to put themselves in danger. This means that they can encounter misleading information or bad advice, which worsens their health situations.
That it is doctors who hold accountable for advising patients is welcomed is reinforced by more supporting evidence below. Third, since it is a business transaction that physicians receive money from patients, they should be responsible for giving advice. Obliviously, patients have to pay the relevant costs of consultative services for hospitals or doctors, thus taking full responsibility for any damage caused is a way to fulfill their duties. Finally, by transcending their profession, doctors can help people, either patients or the general public, enhance the knowledge of medicine. This means that citizens can distinguish between bad advice and good advice, which helps them protect both themselves and those around them.
In conclusion, only doctors have enough specialized knowledge to advise people. So, I totally agree that doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In these days, the question of whether doctors have to take responsibility for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'qualified'.
Suggestion: qualified
... rigorous education and training, he is qualify enough to be a better consultant than a...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...can help people, either patients or the general public, enhance the knowledge of medicine. Thi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, third, thus, at least, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40636042403 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89421512067 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2086498855 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422596040398 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142522023645 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170640866578 0.0667982634062 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296105793203 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152837635957 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In these days, the question of whether doctors have to take responsibility for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'qualified'.
Suggestion: qualified
... rigorous education and training, he is qualify enough to be a better consultant than a...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...can help people, either patients or the general public, enhance the knowledge of medicine. Thi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, third, thus, at least, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40636042403 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89421512067 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2086498855 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422596040398 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142522023645 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170640866578 0.0667982634062 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296105793203 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152837635957 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.