Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree?
Involved in social works and sports can make people more intelligent, happy and healthy life in routine. Only focus on one thing bound you for a specific skill in childhood and not groom in other learning goals.
Having fun activities with children build a fresh and better living standard. When older are do a variety of items with boys or girls then definitely it creates the various type of new and innovation experience. School students also gave the latest ideas and trends in present viability hobbies. Their seniors of youngest enjoy and invent the greatest rules for instance, what are the latest social media websites and apps, which sports and physical activities are trends in the interest of young person, what are the famous entertainment of teens. The time expands with youth present the latest learning items and ways for commodity.
I am in support of these thoughts of people learning and interaction with youngsters can grant the world coming fashions and work. For example, if anyone learns the school's work or sports like basketball with children then its make physical fit and healthier than others, secondly, if parents learn from children latest apps and websites that they can know great from their children. For this coördination and talking can make better friendship and share between both the age gap generation.
If parents cannot do coöperate and talk with children than a gap between both. This makes stopping of learning anything and create in some culture a big gap both of them.
In conclusion, It is best that the older can make the best coördination and all enjoyable activity that can be beneficial for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: done
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Suggestion:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'children the latest'.
Suggestion: children the latest
...others, secondly, if parents learn from children latest apps and websites that they can know gr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in some culture a big gap both of them. In conclusion, It is best that the older...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04710144928 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53018689541 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2000537923 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199921410682 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686837421813 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414433731447 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10611169031 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213287073676 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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