The rate at which corruption is increasing annually is quite alarming. Poor parenting and lack of work to the graduates are the causes of crime increase. Nevertheless, The ways to reduce the incidence will be analysed in this essay .
Corruption is now assumed to be part of some people life because of the extent at which it is rising in the world today. Hence,poor parenting is one of the causes of this problem. Most parents fail to play their roles by starting early to teach the children the right from wrong. This is usually seen among parents who leave their wards in the hands of their caregivers. An example can be seen from a research conducted by a psychologist to detect the causes of criminal actions . Result shows that majority was due to poor child rearing. Also, due to unemployment, majority of the youngsters involve themselves in robbery act and drug addiction and this had led some of them to develop mental illness.
They are so many ways to prevent the rising increase in criminal activities. Firstly, parents should endeviour to give their children better and right training starting from early childhood because it is written in the Bible that children should be groomed in the way they should grow ,so that when they get old,they will not depart from it. Moreover, creation of work and employment of job seekers by the government in every state annually.
To sum it up,in as much as immoral activities is becoming rampant in the world. However,good parenting and creation of job for the unemployed by the government will go a long way in solving the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83882783883 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65137045493 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3690381087 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152149196216 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508761258071 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404725013263 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873424198363 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349130657851 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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