These days, Illegal activities have been rising annually. There are various reasons for this scenario. This essay will discuss the causes and provides possible preventive measures to counteract this situation.
To begin with, poverty is the primary reason for people committing anti-social endeavors. Most of the crimes occur out of necessity and desperation for money, and this is correlated to unemployment. For example, 80% of the criminal activities are theft or extortion which are done for monetary purposes. Also, drugs and alcohol constitute to breaching of laws to a great extent. These not only diminish the thinking capacity of individuals but also drives them out of their senses. For illustration, in most of the hit and run cases convicts are either alcoholic or drug-addicted. Thus, poverty and drug addiction play a major role in the violation of laws by people.
However, these activities can be inhibited by some counteractive measures. Firstly, criminal activities are predominantly nocturnal. So by increasing surveillance during the night, these can be successfully eradicated. As a demonstration, crime rates In India have significantly decreased since the implementation of surveillance cameras in the streets. In addition, imposing strict admonitions can induce fear into persons tending to be a nuisance to society. For instance, since the extension of imprisonment time for physical violence, individuals are now less probable to indulge in fights. In these ways, law and order can be established successfully.
To conclude, there are certain causes like alcoholism for a surge in the rate of criminal activities. Nevertheless, these can be curbed by various actions like an increase in surveillance during the dawn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56179775281 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21901778428 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0313737686 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1578947368 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0526315789 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200383608133 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586785032464 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472999581846 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124506047005 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349479190313 0.056905535591 61% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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