Eradication of anti-social elements is one of the factors that contribute to the peace and harmony of any country. This responsibility majorly lies on the shoulders of the governing body and partly on citizens. This essay will put a spotlight on both sides and eventually conclude with a personal opinion.
As mentioned earlier, it's mostly the ruling body's duty to avoid criminal activities and safeguard citizens' rights. With such superlative power and an extensively strong police force, it is easy to curb illegal activities when compared to normal people. Moreover, crimes generally occur on a large scale which is out of people's reach. For example, let's consider the terror attacks. Special and sophisticated surveillance is required to tackle this issue which can only be provided by the government. So, it's mostly the government's task.
Although the general public cannot do much in this regard, they can help the governing officials in doing the job. Anti-legal activities where ever visible must be reported by us to be eliminated. There should exist social responsibility and accountability in the men and women of a nation. We can collectively avoid petty mishappenings going around us. For instance, let us talk about cybercrimes. These can mostly be prevented by just following some safety measures and using approved sites.
Crime prevention is one of the basic necessary aspects to be looked into. Thus it can be concluded that both the authorities and the public are responsible for achieving peace of living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...th sides and eventually conclude with a personal opinion. As mentioned earlier, its mostly th...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...sonal opinion. As mentioned earlier, its mostly the ruling bodys duty to avoid c...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...only be provided by the government. So, its mostly the governments task. Althoug...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...y the governments task. Although the general public cannot do much in this regard, they can...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ic necessary aspects to be looked into. Thus it can be concluded that both the autho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponsible for achieving peace of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28979591837 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97714744576 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669387755102 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0798416778 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.2352941176 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4117647059 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211641819711 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601691787184 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496395617251 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129589731878 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512205120298 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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