As we see today there is an increase in the usage of plastic bags by most of the small companies resulting in difficulty in degradation.Solutions to this problem mainly include strictly implementing government policies by local shopkeepers and recycling.
On one hand it is generally found that plastic bags are thrown on the roads and in the waste which are eaten by animals making their mass unfit to eat.For instance,in a research found in meat of cattle animals where carbon content was high indicates us how it is effecting animals. There are companies where tyres are burned causing atmospheric pollution resulting in depletion of ozone layer leading natural disasters in the
On the other hand,there is no strict procedures followed which include policies against usage of plastic bags by applying taxes ,implement use of handmade bags,immediate replacement with less carbon plastic bags so that it can be recycled preventing from pollution effecting humans and animals.
To conclude, government action against these usage and preventing from using plastic bags can result in healthy environment.
- Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in correct place.What is your opinion about this? 56
- Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people 73
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and 61
- Companies should encourage employees who work in a high position to leave at the age of 55 in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.Write a letter to the shop1- ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.2- Ask what the prices are3- how long they will be able to hold the goods f 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As we see today there is an increase in th...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Solutions
... resulting in difficulty in degradation.Solutions to this problem mainly include strictly...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... animals making their mass unfit to eat.For instance,in a research found in meat of...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...ing their mass unfit to eat.For instance,in a research found in meat of cattle anim...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e layer leading natural disasters in the On the other hand,there is no strict pro...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...l disasters in the On the other hand,there is no strict procedures followed which ...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... usage of plastic bags by applying taxes ,implement use of handmade bags,immediate...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , immediate
...ng taxes ,implement use of handmade bags,immediate replacement with less carbon plastic ba...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this usage' or 'these usages'?
Suggestion: this usage; these usages
... To conclude, government action against these usage and preventing from using plastic bags ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4450867052 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06957642713 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.100342617 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.5 106.682146367 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.25 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156765795583 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913872673384 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297392860207 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948672644826 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375892483772 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.0946893788 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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