Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
some people believe that keeping home and working place tidy in an organised way and in exact place is very important. I completely agree with this point because it intensifies a person's mood and create a healthy environment.
Firstly, according to a quote 'Cleanliness is next to Godliness' where it is clearly understood that keeping a place tidy not only increases happiness in one's life but also changes the mood in an effective way. it is of real importance where keeping things in a correct way finds a hobby for some people. For instance, Chinese people finds their home as a worship place by cleaning it every few hours. this way of arranging things helps people to find it easily.
Secondly, people living in a home with big family with children allows them to teach and learn the habits of cleaning and keeping things proper, ultimately changes the surrounding to a healthy one. In a work place such as offices or libraries or in a restaurant where people are more attracted to such a neat environment increasing their visit. For instance, in a hotel in India it is shown with irresponsibility in cooking caused many people suffered with severe health issues. people avoid such places where interest is not shown towards improving healthy environment.
I conclude that organising things either in your home or in workplace plays an important role in both urgent requirement of things or change in the mood of a person. keeping place tidy helps the children give a healthy life and teach them the greater living to a better world.
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and 61
- The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses.What extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people prefer to live in hot climates, where as other love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer. 73
- The earth is being filled with waste material such as plastic bags and other rubbish. Is this really happening? What are some solutions to this problem?Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.W 56
- Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people believe that keeping home and wo...
^^^^
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y in an organised way and in exact place is very important. I completely agree wi...
^^
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ith this point because it intensifies a persons mood and create a healthy environment. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ce tidy not only increases happiness in ones life but also changes the mood in an ef...
^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... in ones life but also changes the mood in an effective way. it is of real importance where keeping...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...o changes the mood in an effective way. it is of real importance where keeping thi...
^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...of real importance where keeping things in a correct way finds a hobby for some people. For inst...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...p place by cleaning it every few hours. this way of arranging things helps people to...
^^^^
Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ple suffered with severe health issues. people avoid such places where interest is not...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keeping
...ings or change in the mood of a person. keeping place tidy helps the children give a he...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85984848485 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69251579371 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8154956373 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253634270388 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909973285684 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415977367475 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154017043556 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164161754336 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.