The ease of international travel and the spread of various kind of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

In the era of the scientific revolution and media industry, its been very easy to understand how another side of the world or targeted group of society's life. We can easily get their custom and practices as a list.

There are many advantages over disadvantages because of the development of the travel and media industry.

Development of internet has enabled all humanity to access any kind of information about any part of the world. This enabled humans to understand and see them as one of their own. In support of media and internet ease of traveling across the globe helped to explore and experience the many parts of the world. After ease of international travel, many poor counties developed tourism industry in their land and which led to the development of the poor nations.

In India, for the state of Kerala, a major contribution to their revenues comes from tourism. Sri Lankan economy is completely depend upon tourism industry. Along with tourism media helps in the exchange of culture, language and their way of life. The development of media and ease of travel made this possible.

With good, ease of travel and mass media contributes to some terrific acts. Social media made easy for people to spread false news or idea about a county. Tourism uses flights and automobiles for the purpose of travel, which adds to global pollution. Every hour of airplane travel produces greenhouse gases equivalent to how much carbon dioxide produced by human beings on earth for a period of one year. Since media is easily accessible, people can use it to spread hate and violence.
Development of mass media and ease of international travel helped us to connect all parts of the world. Advantages overweigh the disadvantages.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'produces'' or 'produce's'?
Suggestion: produces'; produce's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99656357388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7024121404 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539518900344 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6646955785 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7777777778 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265982863091 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873808912182 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667127480723 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145491225517 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612980212284 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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