Nowadays, people believe that eating a balanced diet makes them healthier. This essay will discuss this popular topic.
Health life style become very popular among our modern society across the world. Individuals or groups of people follows heaps of diet style, and advocate it. It even easier than ever before, with impact of social media platforms such a Facebook, Instagram, YouTube, etc. ideas of the best diet might be spread within our population overnight. However, not every diet is suitable to each individual for many reasons, such a dietary requirements or preferences, allergy and many other reasons. In this way diet which suits enormous amount of human beings could be harmful to one or more individuals.
Although humans are born as meat eaters, more people become vegetarians, or even more popular in this modern age, vegans. As fruit and vegetable is well known as great source of natural nutrients, lack of animal protein in our body can cause many sickness and eating difficulties. Vegetarian and vegan products might looks healthier, however, their production require additional artificial colours and flavours and not might be always healthy option as taste is the most important factor in eating. In my opinion, choosing being vegetarian or vegan is more about following trendy lifestyle of others than conscious decision.
In conclusion, human beings have been born to follow instincts and natural habits. Overeating unhealthy fast food meals or choosing simply oriented diet is not the right way to go. Also top athletes cheating their diet restrictions and are still able to achieve world class results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'make'?
Suggestion: make
...ple believe that eating a balanced diet makes them healthier. This essay will discuss...
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Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'requirement'?
Suggestion: requirement
...vidual for many reasons, such a dietary requirements or preferences, allergy and many other ...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...ctor in eating. In my opinion, choosing being vegetarian or vegan is more about follo...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...iented diet is not the right way to go. Also top athletes cheating their diet restri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28461538462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5789429512 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4725612102 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138993378846 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407837202729 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430597076404 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795169898733 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212883567166 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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