With growing population across the continents, inhabitants seeking new territories to build their shelters transferred into towns. With this activity, many of unique fauna species are killed. In this essay I would like to shed some light on this recent phenomenon, firstly, I will suggest that the biggest problem is unnecessary occupying of natural territories and then submit to reconstruct current lands already occupied by human-beings as a most viable solution.
Rapidly growing population across the globe follows with necessity to accomodate more and more people. As a result of this human-being looking for new places, where to build new towns, factories and other supportive facilities needed for modern life. Notwithstanding many places have been recognised by authorities as well as activists as a protected areas for future development; corruption and local interest have been reconsidered its status. With growing urban areas, wild species have no space to escape and find a new home to populate.
A possible solution to this problem would be to reconstruct current urban areas. Rebuilding houses in towns and cities in matter to make them higher to accomodate more occupants. The prime example is New York City, where local council rebuilt significant part of the central district and achieved increased in volume of city dwellers of twenty per cent.
To sum up, overpopulating of The Earth is today's problem which caused lives and extinct of many unique species. Humans should focus to rebuilt and accommodate more inhabitants in actual areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'area'?
Suggestion: area
...ies as well as activists as a protected areas for future development; corruption and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, then, well, as for, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88544004701 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636734693878 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0191539254 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201920506095 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711401697978 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728818231262 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117963570143 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362261625125 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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