Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views
Irrefutably , It is a fact that if health is gone everything is gone.It is debatably arguement that several folks opine that it is the duty of administration to fix individual's glucose utilisation.However rest of the masses argue that it is people's authority to maintain the quantity of fructose they consume. This essay would shed light on the valid standpoints in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with the first school of thought, the cardinal point to be consider is that it is the primary duty of the authority to aware people to restrict the overuse of fructose.In the contemporary era numerous folks consume lot of glucose.Owing to that it has bad effects on their health and it causes diabetes.Although due to its overconsumption our new generation also faces plenty of diseases. For example according to the survey,it can be found that,over half of the population experience diabetes because of the excess use of glucose. If the ministry take this responsibility then in the future masses do not have to face the problem relating to diabetes. So it is the responsibility of authority members.
According to the second school of thought another provoking point to be consider is that it is in the hands of the folks to control the value of sugar the use.It's totally depends upon the masses and it should be the duty of every person.If they do not consume glucose according to the health then it will be dangerous for them.Apart from diabetes,they have to face the problem relating to obesity and it is the biggest problem of every individual.For instance the more the glucose in body,the more the diseases.So if masses do not pay attention to the limit of sugar in the eating routine ,then it will be the sign of diseases for them in the future.
In compendium,my personal opinion is that it is in the hands of the people how to reduce the excess use of sugar then in the ministry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, apart from, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82208588957 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07024805848 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481595092025 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.861766645 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.5 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.75 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159857570841 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627567305416 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436266100859 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951743130439 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297773034811 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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