Is economic development necessary to reduce poverty or should economic growth we stop as it damaging the environment.discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's Era, development of economy is essential for any developing country. There are those who say that economic development is important to decrease poverty,However others believe that for the betterment of environment economic growth should be eliminate. in this essay i will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
There are two main reasons. Why people believe that two economic development is vital to reduce poverty level. Perhaps the main point is employment ratio will increase. If economic growth will be improved in certain areas like Business, industry on in medical field, then unemployment will automatically decreased .As a result poverty level will decrease and people get job in every stream. In addition, quality of life will improve if economic developed. For example, in developed countries, even the poor people have basic amenities of life such as food clothing and medical.
Despite these arguments, Many people feel that growth of the economy should be stopped as it is harmful for environment. Firstly, layman do deforestation for the economic betterment, which is not good for environment .For instant, government cut down trees for the construction purpose as they want to built industry or skyscraper .Apart from that ,fumes and water of the industry directly affect environment .For that economic development should be stopped as it has negative impact on society as well as for
Animals.
To conclude, I strongly believe that economic development is very crucial as it as it reduce poverty of any Nation .Also it gives good quality of life to their civilians and provide basic needs. The unemployment ratio will go down if economy increase due to the globalisation. It will create plenty of opportunity for human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, apart from, as for, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30877192982 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8929734129 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.8584474795 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250339868474 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855057921308 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740293026223 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157639695777 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375981040593 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.