In education and employment,some people work harder than others.
Why do some people work harder?
Is it always a good thing to work hard?
Different categories of people works efficiently over others especially in academics and at work place. This usually happens based on the awards that follows. Hard-work surely, is beneficial at all times.
Trophies and gift at the end of every academic session makes students study harder. Relatively, in offices, every staff wants to take the award of the 'five-star staff' of the year; this makes everybody buckle up their shoes. For example, an Hospital in kwara state Nigeria has her Annual General Meeting every January, hard working staff of the hospital are given gifts, then, the outstanding one is given a special gift and the `five-star' title throughout the year. This also applies to the education sectors where students study well to be the best.
There is a general saying that 'hard-work pays'. Yes,it does pay. When a person dedicate his/her time to his/her Job or education,the result will eventually speak either now or later. Of a person is dedicated, the employer or tutor will have trust in the person, assignments will be given without the fear of fumbling, the confidence to represent their sectors well at any level will be there also. Moreover, this is where exposure to various things comes in and lots benefits. For example, a group of people were sponsored to school at Harvard University from Nestle in Nigeria. When the company's managing director was interviewed as to the criteria for sponsoring these people, the response was:- 'they are hard-working set of people and we are proud of them'.
Conclusively, it is beneficial to work-hard in every settings,this is because of the trust, recognition and possible awards that follows. This has made different people work harder than their colleagues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ody buckle up their shoes. For example, an Hospital in kwara state Nigeria has her...
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Line 6, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... general saying that hard-work pays. Yes,it does pay. When a person dedicate his/he...
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Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...his/her time to his/her Job or education,the result will eventually speak either now...
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Line 6, column 392, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...sectors well at any level will be there also. Moreover, this is where exposure to va...
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Line 6, column 442, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
...over, this is where exposure to various things comes in and lots benefits. For example...
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Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...eneficial to work-hard in every settings,this is because of the trust, recognition an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16312056738 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73949883749 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.5116858816 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256206932386 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920836493982 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100479803993 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188481160357 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918405510777 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.