Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds All levels of education from primary school to tertiary school should be free To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education, from primary school to tertiary school should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every citizen must indeed get a school education for free cost irrespective of their financial standards. I completely agree with the statements because education is inevitable and educated personnel is an asset to the country.

There are many reasons for widespread educational facilities to the inhabitants without considering their societal level. Mainly everyone has some inborn talents and abilities which will be expanded with the support of proper education. For instance, there are many scientists and professionals from poor economic backgrounds nowadays like APJ Abdul Khalam in India. Secondly providing school education helps the well-being of the individual and the hospitality of citizens. Everyone would be the well-behaved, polite, and humanitarian attitude towards not only their neighbor or families but also the whole world with effective educational facilities.

It is also considered that free education to people from lower grade schools until the higher level is also beneficial for getting equal opportunities for all civilians. There are many people who are facing difficulties with paying educational fees in private schools. Such students are failing to get enough educational opportunities and thereby the upcoming generation would be a failure. Therefore aspiring academic opportunities would be an inevitable matter in the time being. Pay less education or free education helps the pupil to get enough knowledge regarding many things even they are from low class family.

To sum up, even though free education and wider educational opportunities would be a liability for the nation, the outcome would be a great help. As a result it is indeed to have a education to all inhabitants equally.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57794676806 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03557818621 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5951045644 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326531863943 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117514992561 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495852296803 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212127241435 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268813574421 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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