(ENVIRONMENT) Online shopping is becoming more popular. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of work required? (22/02/2020)
An emerging trend that has generated a widespread phenomenon in the retail market is e-commerce. As a result, shopping online has improved the traffic scene and air pollution, which has long been a thorny problem in a few decades. With that being said, what is also being affected by this trend is the businesses operating in brick and mortar methods.
To look at the environmental aspect, the most important factor to consider is traffic and air pollution. If a normal individual drives his or her vehicles directly to the store to buy the thing they want to, the amount of scarce fossil fuels, such as gasoline, will be wasted and the volume of traffic will increase noticeably. Carbon dioxide emission, even worse, might get out of control, which adversely affects the population health as well as global temperature. Conversely, not only has e- commerce restored the hope of saving the environment, but the wide selection of goods on an internet platform has also brought convenience together with satisfaction to the act of shopping. Instead of everyone having to directly drive to another location to pick up items, all we have to do is waiting at home while having someone delivers the item to our front door.
Another aspect that deserves attention from the e - commerce phenomenon is the businesses. Unlike the form of selling online, whose display system is more and more elaborate and cutting-edge, the traditional retailer resources might be beaten by unsold stocks and struggling to cope with the high cost. Similarly, the combination of gradually increasing cost to lease retail space and decreasing amount of customer will drive businesses to bankruptcy. Assuming a shop owner wanted to design a website, which meets his or her needs, the tons of fee would be something overwhelming. On the other hand, there are a lot of offers from the online market, including voucher, gift card or free delivery, can easily attract loyal and prospective buyers.
In conclusion, online shopping is on the rise, and this trend brings both advantages and disadvantages to the environment and employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, look, similarly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10115606936 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84927124634 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1764998886 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.071428571 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12474233995 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040945654547 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060452790083 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105383423754 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839313549093 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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