The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
In the entire universe, it is our planet earth which supports life form. Are we aware of this huge accomplishment? If yes, are we doing justice to the beautiful nature with which we are bestowed? I believe the answer is NO, our environment is in constant danger due to the actions of government, organization and every individual.
We have been destroying our mother nature in one way or other. Who should take the responsibility of rejuvenating our mother nature, is it the government or an organization or every human being of planet earth. As we all are responsible, everyone needs to do one’s part in reviving environment.
Government needs to enact tougher laws and practice those to curb pollution. Organization and people need to follow the laws and help government. Organization should check their factories machineries and reduce wastage production and follow proper disposal of wastage. Government needs to check periodically that organization are abiding by the rules. People should dispose of garbage in garbage bin, reduce use of plastics, need to plant more trees and educate people about how to save you environment.
Saving our environment and bringing it back from the danger zone needs to be collective effect of all be it government, organization or human being, because it is we all who live here and would gain from this collective action.
- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this? 67
- Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples…. 91
- Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it? 55
- In the education system, assessment through written formal examinations is valid or not. 61
- Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additional funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.Choose which position you most agr 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: ALL_BE_IT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'albeit' (=although)?
Suggestion: albeit
...r zone needs to be collective effect of all be it government, organization or human being...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14732142857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04679895902 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566964285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4876608472 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6923076923 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.153846153846 7.06120827912 2% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222001750554 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722344895769 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563615507455 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136695738122 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440696023036 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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