Environmental damage is a problem in most countries .
What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibilities?
We are living in an epoch with a myriad of cutting-edge technology, and people are enjoying better standards of living. However, along with these advancement global citizens are facing environmental issues than ever. In this essay, I will elaborate on main causes leading to this nuisance and identify those who should be responsible for it.
Regarding factors behind the environmental problems, urbanization and industrialization appear to be the first culprit. It is comparatively understandable because both these two development necessitate large space for modern infrastructures. Undoubtedly, with a view to making room for these constructions, people cut down trees or transform agricultural land into concrete yards, remarkably decreasing green spaces. These severe sabotages thereby engender unavoidable natural calamities such as flood, droughts, Elnino and other extreme weather conditions, exerting serious consequences on people's lives. For example, the flood catastrophe last year caused hundreds fatalities in the central area of Vietnam, and depriving shelters of countless residents. Another striking factor of these environmental damage is irresponsible human behaviors. Needless to say, there has been a wide array of human-induced pollutions which are ascribed to individuals and factories. To exemplify, it is not rare to see people who do not hesitate to litter ubiquitously or witness enterprises which are not reluctant to pump raw sewage directly with water sources. As a result, original crystal-clear lakes are covered with black and greasy substance, giving off revolting smell.
To curb this problem, both governments, cooperations and individuals have to date responsibilities. The duty firstly falls on local and national authorities. It is imperative to impose reasonable sanctions non-compliance regardless inadvertently or intentionally. Next, enterprises should seriously abide by laws and regulations, making their profits while contributing to reduce carbon footprints by applying smart trash processing. Finally, the mission rests with every citizen. There is a need for propaganda or campaigns to raise inhabitants' environmental consciousness.
To conclusion, environmental destructions are attributed d widespread of urbanization and industrialization and the irresponsible human behaviors. To mitigate its consequences, governments, factories and citizens have to join hands to make a positive development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advancement' or 'these advancements'?
Suggestion: this advancement; these advancements
...tandards of living. However, along with these advancement global citizens are facing environmenta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10724637681 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59571496946 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689855072464 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1922034841 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.35 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118623042562 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315965760844 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509175360271 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061626944635 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219476142224 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.86 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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