Even with the constant improvements in healthcare, many countries are
struggling to provide adequate health provisions for all their citizens
What do you think are the main causes of this situation? What might be effective in tackling the problem?
In recent decades, with a huge advancement of technology, the quality of the healthcare system worldwide constantly improving. Nevertheless, there are still many nations that face certain obstacles in furnishing medical services to all the inhabitants in a rational way. There are various reasons and solutions for this situation, which will be discussed in this passage.
The principal and most common cause of this predicament is the deficiency in financial resources. In some of the countries, most of all the undeveloped countries, these governments of those countries usually concentrate on promoting their position of strength which always is agriculture. Therefore, although there is a significant rise in health services, these countries still be cramped by the tight national budget and the chances for development will be few and far between. In addition, these nations are affected by unfettered population growth and the shortage of healthcare personnel in developing unions. This led to the income of a doctor is not appropriate for their efforts which means healthcare costs may rise and makes it difficult for governments to provide affordable healthcare to everyone. In the end, the lack of healthcare professionals not only affects the quality of care but also limits the availability of health services.
To tackle this problem, there are concrete ways that can be taken to. Firstly, governments need to focus on their healthcare's national budget and ensure that adequate resources are available. Secondly, governments should invest in training more healthcare professionals to always are prepared for health services. And finally, governments may need to modernize the infrastructure and system of healthcare such as building more healthcare facilities.
In conclusion, inadequate health provision is indeed a problem that involves solutions that may not be easy to implement. However, these issues, in turn, can be solved through increasing investment in healthcare, training more healthcare professionals, and modernizing healthcare infrastructure. Overall, These difficulties can be overcome by governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74132492114 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25144941451 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0263833035 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248489244392 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793181693662 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340543030993 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147380128659 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206437096872 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.