Even though ads are annoying and amusing, it influences people to buy things needed or not needed. Do you agree or disagree?
Ads are the best ways of advertising any product it has a dazzling effect on customers mind and compelled people's to buy both products which they needed or not. I agree with this statement, advertisements have mesmerizing content and also companies used big celebrities to promote their products, all these things, force the customer to take both products needed or not needed.
Apparently, companies generate various strategies to enhance their market share and productivity, advertisements on television or by making big posters have the largest impact on peoples'. Reiterating the same advert paralyzed the human wisdom and people are unable to differentiate between their basic necessities and worthless wishes. Advertisements are full of overwhelmingly impressive thoughts that have sedative and hallucination effect on human mind. Advertisements attract people, it has various flavors which people want to taste, to do so, they do wrong choices. For example, Moothot finance company from Kerala, increase their productivity and established on a large scale by continuous advertisements on television, a visual impact is the highest effect on human mind and people deposit their money and take a loan by watching attractive ads.
People always trying to follow celebrities and imitate their style, trend, companies take advantage of this, as industry promote their product, hire celebrities for advertisement and enhance their market value. Sports players and actress do advertisements for different products which has a direct impact on young children as later blindly follow them. For example, in India cricket sportmen are quite famous people always copy their style.
To conclude this, advertisements are the sole factor which describes the new products in the market to people and their splendor effect compel people to buy things that they needed or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...e unable to differentiate between their basic necessities and worthless wishes. Advertisements ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53146853147 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99502415524 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7534417819 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.818181818 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127738193266 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573239117811 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511398349028 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997958220943 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494298808573 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.