Every country has poor people and different ways to deal with them. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? Give reasons and examples of your own experience.
It is undoubtly the case that 'poverty' is the 'burning questions of the day' which is observed in every nation that also affecting the society but, they have different strategies to tackle this problem.In this essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for this obstacle and suggest some preventive measures that authorities as well as individuals could implement to mend the hurdle of poverty.
The first step is to understand why poorness is seen in every country? Broadly speaking, Nodoubt, this is a modern scenerio but, there are two main reasons for this. The first and foremost is 'illetracy' as, we know that massive number of people are not aware regarding education. Therefore, they are not able to acquire any vocational skill. As a result, illetrate person unable to earn money ultimately, spend life in poverty. This trend could have voluminous negative outcomes. The primary one is that, if individuals are not educated it directly affect sustainable development of the nation.Last but not least, lack of awareness about family planning is the main cause of poorness. It is mostly observed that in rural area for instance, due to lack of awareness they gave birth to plethora of children. Consequently, a single family member is not able to fullfill the necessities of his family. Thus, I have to say that unawareness regarding family planning is the 'part and parcel' factor that arose this obstacle. In fact, this problem has resulted in decline the economic development of the country.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be to make public aware about the negative impact of poorness on the development of nation. The best epitome of this is organisation of seminars, street play by the students of different institutes, which plays highly significant role to overcome this problem.
In Summary, there are variety of different factors that have led to make the problem worst. While, it may not be possible to find the complete solution of this but, this could be probably solved by creating awareness in the minds of people of the nation.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03072625698 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71465582125 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.504005584 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.941176471 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098062219431 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308264277821 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414651068588 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616103150708 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272496536122 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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