Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor and poverty. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? What can be done to assist the poor?
Over the past few years, the number of people who suffer from poverty has been increasing at an alarming rate, affecting not only themselves but also the development of a nation. The following essay will demonstrate some justifications and propose possible solutions to this phenomenon.
One of the major factors contributing to the issue of poverty is malnutrition and stunting. When people don’t get enough food to eat, this will mean they lack the strength and energy needed to work efficiently, their immune system will weaken, leaving them easily susceptible to illness, thus dramatically reducing the productivity of their work. It is reported that adults who are stunted as children earn, on average, 22% less than those not suffering from stunting. This, consequently, holds back the growth of economy. Another problem worths considering is the lack of education. In some African countries, parents are reluctant to provide their children with adequate education which helps them to change their destiny. On the contrary, these parents would rather involve their offsprings in paid work from a very early age to make ends meet for the family. Besides, discrimination against girls in a few societies also prevents women from being adequately educated.
So dealing with this problem involves the promotion of agricultural production firstly. Governments are encouraged to donate farmers with modern technological machines such as tractors which will help to improve their crops. In addition, some food organizations should be held, for instance. HEIFER International is an organization aiming to help people create their own supply of food in a sustainable way. Hence, food prosperity plays a critical role in meeting the growth of population of a country. Furthermore, governments should supply free education for underprivileged people. These people should also be awarded a scholarship when achieving a good result in the study. This way, they will be encouraged to try harder, develop to their full potential. Then, in a few nations, the prejudice towards the role of women should be eliminated, all classes should have access to an equal education.
To recapitulate, there’s no doubt poverty is an increasingly worrying issue nowadays. Undernourishment and lack of education are two obvious reasons leading to this issue. Nonetheless, it can be mitigated well by enhancing food production and promoting a free education system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sustainable way" with adverb for "sustainable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... people create their own supply of food in a sustainable way. Hence, food prosperity plays a critica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, nonetheless, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44473684211 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05854576818 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607894736842 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3070194528 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0454545455 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111821659361 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334403989848 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237887424691 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705322438936 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174983210168 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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