Every country should have a free health service,even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Healthy life is the successful key to survive the whole life with happiness and joy. The growing ratio of fundamental diseases reports that government should need to take action to prevent by providing at least the basic health facilities, so that the people who suffer from illness can cure themselves and will lead the happy life. I completely agreed with the notion to provide basic health amenities to the public for free.
To commence with, every country has population who are below the poverty line and seek the basic amenities to survive themselves such as food and health. The legislation should need to address the basic treatments to them , so that they can keep themselves healthy. For instance, recent surveys reported that 50% of the South American population are facing these kind of problems.
Moreover, the basic vaccinations needs to be provided to the people without paying.And eventually the whole population will be healthier. This can be seen in covid-19 pandemic in the past year , because vaccination was applied for everyone at free of cost and it reduced the number of deaths by covide tremendously.
To recapitulate, basic health facilities should be provided for free at basic level all over the world, because of benefits it brings, even though the latest treatment might not be available because they are still expensive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to address the basic treatments to them , so that they can keep themselves health...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...he South American population are facing these kind of problems. Moreover, the basic va...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...e provided to the people without paying.And eventually the whole population will be...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en in covid-19 pandemic in the past year , because vaccination was applied for eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, at least, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15837104072 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69400380442 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9576880413 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174947317929 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713825068612 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657839762624 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116650195963 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681178423732 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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