Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is commonly believed that many languages tend to disappear as the years pass by. Some individuals argue that the lost of many languages is not paramount due to the fact that life would become straightforwardly without them. This essay agrees with this statement and will first explain how less number of languages in the planet could permit greater conexion between people and secondly the lack of necessity of teaching them as a compulsory subject in schools.
To begin with, less number of languages in the world could lead to better communication skills between people from different backgrounds. Therefore, misinformation could be avoided and several aspects of life will be easier. To say in other words, people from every single place in the world could be able to understand each other in a straightforward manner. To illustrate this, Africa has lost 10 languages in the last century and a recent study has proven that nowadays most of the African countries talk in English, thus they have improved the communication between them and the entire world.
On the other hand, it is crucial to reduce the number of subjects to teach in school. This is because in modern times there are plethora of things to learn and decreasing the teaching hours of foreign languages would encourage youngsters to enhance other skills. There is no reason why studying other languages when children could manage this study time to learn for example how to play an instrument.
To conclude, although a large number of languages are disappearing, this could be beneficial for everyone. Since it might improve connexion between people from different cultures and in addition would not be necessary to include as a formal subject of a school curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09059233449 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79952526661 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4898229569 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272684993722 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100731044441 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494252296204 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160262936029 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596381712298 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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