Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is fact that there are several languages in the world and many of them extinct every year. Some people believe that the extinction of some languages is not a crucial problem since communication will be more effective and easy with fewer languages. However, I completely disagree with the statement and have given my reasons for it in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Predominantly, the disappearance of several languages year after year will lead to the cultural loss of the community linked to that language. Due to this, many communities will be at verge of extinction. For example, a survey was conducted which proved that new generation was unable to understand their own regional language due to its extinction. They were not even aware of their cultural language. Thus, the loss of certain cultures is directly linked to disappearance of their regional languages.
Also, the eradication of languages every year will create a generation gap between the people which will make old generation more prone to mental diseases like loneliness and suffocation. Also, it will create miscommunication between the young and old ones as the old people will find it difficulty to communicate with the young people in a language other than their native one. That is why, eradication of languages every year can affect the health of older generation.
In conclusion, the several languages shows the richness of world civilisations, thus they should be passed from generation to generation in order to save their heritage.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'languages'' or 'language's'?
Suggestion: languages'; language's
...ominantly, the disappearance of several languages year after year will lead to the cultur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04731720665 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8138027434 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310690288048 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116063128742 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787942633892 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186611179843 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575320460974 0.056905535591 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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