Requirements for acquiring a well-paid job have been drastically changed. Some people consider the tertiary level education to be indispensable to get employed on a higher position while others find experience and soft skills of an individual to be more prominent. This essay will discuss both the views in details at first and my opinion at the last.
The major reason behind why certain people opine that lucrative jobs belongs to those with university degrees is that the labor market is becoming increasingly competitive, which causes unqualified candidates to struggle to get a good job. For instance, a survey conducted by World Education System yielded a result that in order to employ an interviewee on a higher rank in the company, the candidates with degrees were given more preference. That is why, third level education is considered to be important for getting a good job.
On the contrary, other people believe that having experience and acquiring personal skills are very much effective in order to get employed in multinational companies which offers great packages to its employees. This is because there are certain job fields which do not require any specific qualification but merely the communication skills and experience. For example, there is no particular stream of education is required to get a good job in the field of sales, marketing, et cetera. Also, the businessmen are able to run their own business without any degree because of their generation to generation experience. Thus, these play a pivotal role in order to get great job.
This essay argued why some people appraises the need of university education while others value the experience and soft skills of a person to get employed on a respected position. However, I believe that third level education as well as experience and personal skills are very much essential to fill the job requirements of a prestigious premises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'premise'?
Suggestion: premise
...l the job requirements of a prestigious premises.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, third, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15064102564 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9243260236 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6817882118 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.615384615 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337794783593 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119751734172 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882100018027 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218242105182 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046728323254 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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