Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Each year, different languages have gone virtually extinct. Some people think that this type of disappearance remains insignificant and also claim that life will become convenient if this type of trend continues to decrease further in numbers. But, i completely disagree with this idea and this essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, the majority of people believe that disappearance of varieties of languages in the world can lead the lives of people easy. This can be exemplified by the fact that the languages which are gradually disappearing are generally spoken by the indigenous people and they normally represent a minority group, who rarely contribute and participate in the development of a society and a nation. As it is clear that political, economical and administrative aspects are dealt with a major language, so ceasing of minor languages is nowhere nearly as crucial as major dialects. As a consequence, focusing on a major language can remove confusions and address difficulties, which are often faced by public when are several languages, eventually dooming to a comfortable life.
On the other hand, fading away of languages can have enormous negative impacts on communities and knowledge levels. To illustrate, if public lose languages, they are naturally deprived of parts of their cultural traditions that are closely tied to that language, such as songs, myths and poetry that are not easily transferred to another language. Therefore, their values are gradually replaced with new ones resulting to complete loss of identities of that society. In addition, language can also be considered as scientific knowledge in topics such as medicine, philosophy, botany, and so on. When a language is lost, this knowledge is lost as well.
To conclude, even though many people consider vanishing of languages unimportant, they remain extremely valuable interms of fostering culture and demonstrating intelligence.
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Essay evaluation report
which are often faced by public when are several languages, eventually dooming to a comfortable life.
which are often faced by public when there are several languages, eventually dooming to a comfortable life.
flaws:
The verbs are either 'is/are' or 'can'
ideas are good.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 306 350
No. of Characters: 1616 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.182 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.281 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.959 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.378 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.323 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.552 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43464052288 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04495382129 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4935230924 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296782787757 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991502097487 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618824965659 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168306935395 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972569326324 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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