Some analysis suggests that the inheritance has significant impact towards the behaviours and advancements of human beings than any actions we carry out in the life. This essay will discuss both sides and reach a conclusion.
On the one hand, the supporters of genetic influence insist that it is by far the most vital determinations of our personalities. Numerous genes have been identified and their direct relationships with the personalities of people. Take MRSA genes for an instance which is also known as irritable temperament gene. Whats more, CADM2 genes that control brain actions and cel...
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Essay evaluation report
has significant impact towards the behaviours
has a significant impact towards the behaviours
has significant impacts towards the behaviours
Sentence: Had inborn characters become powerful and decisive, both sisters would have faced common fates, so we can say without any dilemma that practilities become the ultimate deciding factor.
Error: practilities Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 2005 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.221 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.852 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.805 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.505 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...so known as irritable temperament gene. Whats more, CADM2 genes that control brain ac...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: during
...nance claim that the experiences gained during during livelihood are the major drivers of ind...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... genetics in terms of final figuring of ones behaviour. To demonstrate, twins Ann an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34114583333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92088492398 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7540041413 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.1875 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22446317928 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057954795314 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513584681175 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119585616226 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130042086851 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.