Everyone believes that it is important to protect the environment however seldom do that themselves. Why is it important to protect environment by ourselves? What actions should we do?
As a result of population explosion, environmental issue has become a topic of frequent discussion around the globe. Almost everyone recognizes the significance of taking immediate action to conserve the environment. Individuals, however, tend to become reluctant when it comes to the contribution of their time and effort to address this issue.
It is undeniable that environmental protection is of significant meaning that requires attention from each individual on the planet. The quality of the living environment is inextricably linked with human activities. Human activities, ranging from driving cars emitting toxic wastes and chemicals to shopping for environmentally harmful products, are to blame for the deteriorating environment. Furthermore, living in an optimal environment, people reduce the possibilities of suffering from health-related problems. There are plenty of research findings confirm that many severe diseases, such as chronic bronchitis and cancer, are associated with polluted air. Therefore, environmental conservation is in the best interests of humanity
Environment problems can, of course, be dealt with individual’s active participation in large-scale environmental campaigns, but the better ways are to deal with the root causes on a daily basis. To begin with, everyone can contribute to the improvement of air quality by travelling with public transport rather than private cars. By reducing car use, exhaust fumes that are emitted into the air can be diminished and pollution-related disease can be prevented. Another measure we can take to tackle the pollution problem is the proper disposal of household wastes. Those that are recyclable as well as the non-biodegradable ones should be categorized according to the guidance of local environmental sector to optimize outcomes of waste management.
In conclusion, environmental pollution is detrimental to our living condition and poses threats to human health, we should all strive to protect our living environment through daily activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85570469799 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46970291821 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634228187919 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7125748196 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876779755522 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321336204182 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382008828037 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623307519503 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04041553372 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.