Everyone should become Vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that people do not need to eat meat to have a healthy body and it is better is that every people should become vegetarian. While I accept that it may suit with many people, I would argue that people should eat both vegetable and meat to providing essential nutrients for themselves.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people should eat full of vegetables in their meals. One reason is that fibre which is involved in dried fruits has an important role to play in healthy diets. From the health perspective, not providing sufficient vegetables may be the main cause lacking vitamins and minerals which help people keep their body healthy and active. Another reason is that fibre is an important factor which essential to protect people’s skins from detrimental factors. Vitamins and minerals in vegetables can help recreate the cells helping people have a strong and beautiful skin.
On the other hand, I believe that a healthy diet is a diet with the balance of nutrients from both vegetable and meat. Firstly, nutrients such as protein in meat play an important role in weakening a person’s immune system which helps people holding up from extreme disasters. Secondly, meat has a nutrient helping people feel their meals much more delicious which allows skinny persons eat more that give a good chance to gain their weight they hope.
In conclusion, although the option to become vegetarian or the option eating a diet with both vegetable and meat are advantageous in their own ways, it seems to me that meat plays an important role in a healthy diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90774907749 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55058169316 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516605166052 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2207225412 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.909090909 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216820281591 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915750893203 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924712912852 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158953378052 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820374894321 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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