It goes without saying that old people are the treasure for the society.But many older people are facing a number of problems such as they feel lonely and in this stage they do not have a good health.So experts suggest that to live a healthy life style,they should do some excercise and try to spend some time with others. There are some causes for this phenomenon and i also try to give some valid solutions.
To begin with,there are plethora causes why older peolpe are becoming the succumb of isolation and suffering with different health problems.First and foremost,in this modern era ,young generation do not have enough time to spend withtheir grand parents and they feel irritate when they go out with their them. So,as a result,in the home they have to sit alone for along time which feel them isolate. In addition,some older people are doing job,due to hectic schedule they feel tired early,so after spending whole day on workplace, they do not give the preference to any kind of excercise which become the causebof unhealth.
Moving furthermore, we can not deny that problem always comes with solution. There are some solution which can bring some happiness in older's life. Firstly,it is a first duty of family members that they should spend some time with their grand-parents and go for a healthy walk with them. Which can help them to feel that,they are also special and important part of the family. Apart from this,older people who are doing job,they should make a schedule for their work and as well as for health. On the top of it,government should open some clubs,where older can spend some time with same age group people, it also will work as a stress-buster for them.
To recapitulate,older can overcomes themselves from these problems,but they should always try to do some activities which are meaningfull for them and young generation should also sit with them and share their ideas with this older will feel good.
- Student from rural areas find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that universities should make it especially easy for them to study at. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 56
- Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from lonelyness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, apart from, as for, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89696969697 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62366149354 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512121212121 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5611449163 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153452960133 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647193169853 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039333978102 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107994676705 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191762006635 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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