Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.
What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
Research show that, adults in the past, because of regular sports and strong communication with their family and friends were happier and healthier than old people live now. There are variety reasons for this happening and also, there are several solutions for reducing loneliness and increasing healthy in new generation.
one reason for grandparents loneliness is that, nowadays parents have to work as full-time because of economic problem. Consequently, they do not have enough time for spending with elderly and even their children. In addition, with advent of social media and computer game, children spend more time of day for playing with these gadgets. For above reasons, older people cannot communicate with members of family and gradually feeling loneliness. likewise, increasing the number of vehicles with fossil fuels, and greenhouse gases which lead to emission of toxic fumes such as carbon dioxide and CO at the atmosphere, creating health hazards like heart illness and lung problems for people particularly elderly because of their physical situation and age conditions.
Moreover, there are solutions for reducing these problems. Firstly, governments should provide places or arrange a tour for elder people who they can meet and talk with each other. For example, a cruise or museum visit can be had very positive affect in their moods as well as assist to reduce loneliness. Also, this is a true fact that older people are weaker in terms of body’s immune system than teenager and adults. Therefore, their nutrition should be health completely. For this reason, the precise supervision on this issue by their children and the government can be had very effective impact on their healthy.
To sum up, we should accept this fact that grandparents in modern world have more require to attention not only mentally but also, physically and in terms of healthy. Consequently, the government should provide conditions for decreasing these problems.
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Suggestion: Likewise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42765273312 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67526821035 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.275441839 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195255114634 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699273285439 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427305210395 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124456560125 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508378790299 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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