Nowadays, in contradiction to the rise in technology one can known about various traditions. This also plays 'impact on provisional culture. These impacts can be in many forms. This essay delves about these impacts and says optimistic and negative views in this. The impacts are generally in lifestyle and in some cases professionally. However, in my point the advantages outweigh the drawbacks.
On one hand, the exposure to online became common with rapid rise in technology. Due to this, individuals can know about other nations culture through cinemas, comics and even from news channels. In this entire world each place has its own lifestyle and these can make drastic change for others. This plays much useful role for even government to know about neighboring teritories. Through movies youth can know how others dress and get inspired from it. The politician can see other country laws and implement them in their own area. I would like to say how this influenced me, I used to watch much anime(basically Japanese comics), though I learnt how to be clean in ones and house. The comics show that we need to use different shoes in different places. For instance, separate shoe for school, playing, in the house and different for washroom. Therefore, this play huge role in making life haappy.
On other hand, this can have destroy own culture. Since learning new ways makes one to forget old manners. Getting unknow culture will be benefitual in someways but destroys the exsisted way of life. However, these changes are helpful in numerous ways. For istance, in India before the invasion of British people's main work is farming and there were no other occupations. With the introduction of english culture, the people came to know about different occupations and even got to know about the fashion ways, as previously there were no jeans and shirts in India. Therefore, even these negative impacts can be positive for some.
To summarize, the influence through televisions, comics and other online medias changes individuals lifestyle. These have positive and negative impacts on life. However, the advantages make the drawbacks minor and can even be neglected. Thus, I think it has huge optimistics values
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'know' or 'be known'?
Suggestion: know; be known
...ction to the rise in technology one can known about various traditions. This also pla...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...s optimistic and negative views in this.The impacts are generally in lifestyle and ...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
...about neighbouring theritories. Through movies youth can know how others dress and get...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'destroyed'.
Suggestion: destroyed
...haappy. On other hand, this can have destroy own culture. Since learning new ways ma...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and, this can have destroy own culture. Since learning new ways makes one to forget o...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12983425414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65180852605 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3376762936 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4230769231 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11538461538 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821780182022 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291723127496 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368732461027 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727157756162 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048601100321 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'know' or 'be known'?
Suggestion: know; be known
...ction to the rise in technology one can known about various traditions. This also pla...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...s optimistic and negative views in this.The impacts are generally in lifestyle and ...
^^^
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
...about neighbouring theritories. Through movies youth can know how others dress and get...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'destroyed'.
Suggestion: destroyed
...haappy. On other hand, this can have destroy own culture. Since learning new ways ma...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and, this can have destroy own culture. Since learning new ways makes one to forget o...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12983425414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65180852605 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3376762936 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4230769231 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11538461538 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821780182022 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291723127496 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368732461027 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727157756162 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048601100321 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.