The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Undoubtedly, one of the foremost and paramount ambitions of all human beings is being prosperous, and they always make an effort to attain this purpose. However, calmness has different meaning among people, and there are a lot of factors that have effect on it. Indeed, family plays a significant role in people’s life. While some of people believe that extended family is less important now than it was in the past, other agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, in my point of view, although extended family is less important now but having extended family can be great.
Today, extended family is less important now because of some important and critical reasons, which are related with modern life. One of the most important factors is independence, people likes being independent and they want to experiment and explore, decide and live lonely. I don’t know is there psychological evidence to explain this behavior or not but this is my own experience that my brothers and my friends and also everyone that I know like independent life, they want to make and spend their money and they like to make decision for their life. Another important factor is modern life conditions, good job is not available always in our hometown and people go to another city and this is reason for abandonment of family, also new house are small to living a lot of people and they are always designed for two or three persons. Communication tools are simply available and we can contact with our family several times and speak with all of them, so distance is not a big problem. Last year I was in Tehran and my family lived in Khoy, my mother called me all time and we spoke about daily events, really I thought that I am in home.
In spite what mentioned before, it is not debatable that extended family has numerous advantages, this is so exciting to live with all family in the same house, actually this is like you are in the family party all day, this is crowded and noisy but it’s time for happiness and overcome to anxiety. When I was growing up we lived with my father’s family, children were able to play all the time with each other and we always were happy and healthy. Our family was a big and members solved their problem together and if someone had a problem other men or women helped and there wasn’t any pressure on that person. Extended family makes an effort to solve each member’s problem and responsibility and respect is important aspect of these families. In the extended family works divided between members and each person has specific works, for instance I was responsible for buying bread and my brother bought milk every day, and all kids helped each other in school homework. According to this reasons some people believe that live in extended family isn’t less important than it was in the past.
In recapitulation, each person depending on his characteristics and temperaments believe that what living form is good for him or his family. However, in my point of view the extended family is now less important than it was in the past because of modern life style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...ignificant role in people’s life. While some of people believe that extended family is less im...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'were'.
Suggestion: were always
...lay all the time with each other and we always were happy and healthy. Our family was a big...
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Line 3, column 985, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... other in school homework. According to this reasons some people believe that live i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 13.1623246493 274% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 10.4138276553 365% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2559.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 539.0 315.596192385 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74768089054 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54626576644 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465677179963 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 823.5 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2193421485 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.684210526 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3684210526 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284888836706 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122980502654 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139853110284 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226336159606 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727040330265 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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