Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is rightly remarked that Success is the problem but failure is the formula, you cannot solve the problem without knowing the formula. These are two ends of a coin. However, a few people assert that only strong determination can bring success while others condemn and say that other factors play a crucial role in uplifting any individual. I do not entirely concur with this notion. This essay will scrutinize both the viewpoints.
Advocates of first virtue say that a full dedication along with the proper concentration can succour any person to reach on heights. Also, Failure should not be on their list when they are working hard. The person who is unable to accomplish any task whether it is related to studies or work is not paying his 100%.
On the flip side, many people believe that there are a plenty of contributing factors except the desires. The word FAIL itself says First Attempt In Learning. It is a stepping stone to success. Moreover, every person has gone through numerous failures to achieve success. For instance, the Prime Minister of India, Mr. Narendra Singh Modi was once a tea seller and with his strong determination, he is the head of the country. Another exemplary case could be Thomas Edison who invented the bulb. During his studies, he had failed a plethora of times but those failures do not indicate that his desire was not strong enough.
Mulling over the topic, Although desires lend a helping hand in achieving any goal but several things also assist in the victory including luck, availability of resources and financial support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9138576779 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52657188438 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3096272472 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159080198569 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443392623012 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555774929628 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792826413197 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046076826146 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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